Words Are My Life

Words Are My Life

Monday, March 10, 2014

Remembering to Count (Flash Fiction #1)



Smoke burned my eyes as I ran for shelter. Another bomb was about to drop from the plane and I did not want to be anywhere near the explosion.  I dove under a crumpled home and curled into a ball hoping that I would be safe one more day. 
I shut my eyes tightly envisioning the life I had before the war. It was painful, but in life threatening moments, it would be more painful to not remember anything. It seems all I do now is remember.
The ground trembled beneath my figure. The bomb must have finally hit the ground. I wonder how many friends I lost this time –I don’t want to think about it!-? I’ve lost so many that I couldn’t even begin to count them all.  Counting. It’s something I do now.  Days, deaths, bombs, bodies. I even count the appendages left on my body because too often, I see people with their arms or legs gone.

1 comment:

  1. I really like this. It's very descriptive and paints an image for the reader.

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